tag:blogger.com,1999:blog-3231222567027245490.post9155838274608854730..comments2012-01-17T23:20:27.465+00:00Comments on Underlord Studios: Improvements to StoryboardUnknownnoreply@blogger.comBlogger5125tag:blogger.com,1999:blog-3231222567027245490.post-44653923304996403632011-10-21T23:07:56.945+01:002011-10-21T23:07:56.945+01:00Indeed that could be cool!Indeed that could be cool!chris1409https://www.blogger.com/profile/07742069124588196727noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-3231222567027245490.post-39178508614115759962011-10-21T23:04:32.344+01:002011-10-21T23:04:32.344+01:00Mentioning the weapon may not be what's needed...Mentioning the weapon may not be what's needed, but I think we do need a shot of it - in the background of the lab perhaps? It'll also give us a chance to design a crazy 50s death ray (which should be fun)Danielhttps://www.blogger.com/profile/14488553957994914103noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-3231222567027245490.post-91790182672647460002011-10-21T22:19:43.750+01:002011-10-21T22:19:43.750+01:00Thanks for the feedback guys, I defintely agree wi...Thanks for the feedback guys, I defintely agree with the language Dan and you've put what i've put just more 1950's..... so awesome!<br /><br />I don't think mentioning the actual idea of the weapon is what we need, I think we just needt keep it at all other weapons are not working. I like the idea of the beast absorbing the power from the impacts.chris1409https://www.blogger.com/profile/07742069124588196727noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-3231222567027245490.post-11903087441825898752011-10-21T20:50:06.234+01:002011-10-21T20:50:06.234+01:00Unintended benefit - DNA was proved to be responsi...Unintended benefit - DNA was proved to be responsible for inheritance in the early 1950s, so I like the idea of chucking it in as a piece of techno-babble. However, since this is a B Movie, I think we really want the described mechanism to be obviously wrong (since the writer would certainly not be bothered with scientific accuracy).<br /><br />Might I suggest something along the lines of<br /><br />"Atomic waste has been incorporated into the Centipede's DNA, energising it at the cellular level and leading to this unnatural growth"<br /><br />and<br /><br />"My readings indicate that the Centipede is absorbing the power of the military's attacks, leading to an increase in the rate of growth. If my calculations are correct, within 2 days it will be bigger than the island of Manhattan!"<br /><br />I think this will help with the money shot, since we could get away with a really big Centipede.<br /><br />I don't like the dialogue about "no weapon of the human race can harm it" - I think it's not psuedoscientific enough. Perhaps some more convoluted thing.<br /><br />"We cannot burn it, but we must indeed fight fire with fire! Luckily, I have been working of an anti-atomic ray to neutralise the atomic explosives of our enemies, which I believe is the answer to our problem..."<br /><br />Incidentally, I think we need to take care to use the term "atomic" rather than "nuclear" - it's more 1950s (and sounds slightly odd, which I think adds to the "period£ feel)Danielhttps://www.blogger.com/profile/14488553957994914103noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-3231222567027245490.post-25256507088243334752011-10-21T20:27:41.135+01:002011-10-21T20:27:41.135+01:00The amendments seem to answer Alan's questions...The amendments seem to answer Alan's questions on those specific scenes, but still think finding the money shot would would allow us to back track the rest on the rest of the storyboard. Plus, as mentioned in the meeting should we include the weapon to defeat the monster?Orisakolade Orisadamilare https://www.blogger.com/profile/05130676498276670626noreply@blogger.com